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		<title>presence</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[“The Blood-red Stain on the Bone-white Cloth” Scott Wiggerman has achieved a noteworthy reputation as a widely-published poet, editor, and poetry workshop facilitator. Presence, his long-awaited second book-length collection of poems, certainly solidifies his standing as a contemporary poet of &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2012/01/27/presence/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>“The Blood-red Stain on the Bone-white Cloth”</p>
<p>Scott Wiggerman has achieved a noteworthy reputation as a widely-published poet, editor, and poetry workshop facilitator.  <em>Presence</em>, his long-awaited second book-length collection of poems, certainly solidifies his standing as a contemporary poet of seriousness and distinction.</p>
<p>Wiggerman intelligently divides his collection into five sections: Water, Air, Earth, Fire, and Spirit, the Elemental Correspondences historically utilized to represent the forces of nature. Whether he writes in free verse or within the rigors of complex poetic forms, he does so with equal excellence and assured artistry. His sonnets and villanelles are especially brilliant and memorable, rivaling those of the best of his nationally-recognized contemporaries.</p>
<p>There are four major thematic threads which run throughout and seamlessly unify the tapestry of the collection: 1) the gay male’s courageous triumph against the evils of bigotry and discrimination; 2) the inadequacies and shortsightedness of religious orthodoxy; 3) the power and transcendent capabilities of love, both sensual and spiritual; and 4) the indefatigability of a fierce human spirit which celebrates the now and embraces the beautiful mystery at the core of ephemeral human existence. Each theme is subtly and convincingly revealed through Wiggerman’s uncanny mix of humor, refreshing candor, high intelligence, and hard-earned wisdom.</p>
<p><em>Presence</em> is an ambitious, significant, and memorable collection of poetry.  I give it my highest recommendation.</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://www.larrydthomas.com/">Larry D. Thomas</a>, Alpine, Texas</p>
<p><a href="http://vacpoetry.org/2012/01/07/scott-wiggerman-biography/">Scott Wiggerman</a>. <em>Presence</em>. San Antonio: <a href="http://library.stmarytx.edu/pgpress/">Pecan Grove Press</a>, 2011. ISBN 978-1-931247-95-5.</p>
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		<title>amblings</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[odd stone out after reading Leung Ping-Kwan’s amblings 1 a thousand years and this mirror pond takes emptiness in, empty mountain no one there in an ocean of dry where anyone can see all save one anywhere garden changes every &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/amblings/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>odd stone out</strong><br />
<em>after reading Leung Ping-Kwan’s</em> amblings</p>
<p>1</p>
<p>a thousand years and this<br />
mirror pond takes emptiness<br />
in, empty mountain no one<br />
there in an ocean of dry<br />
where anyone<br />
can see all<br />
save one<br />
anywhere</p>
<p>garden changes<br />
every time a leaf falls<br />
every time light falls there</p>
<p>still<br />
waterflow<br />
comforts all<br />
who do not know</p>
<p>human voices echo<br />
sorrow passing<br />
passing joy</p>
<p>2</p>
<p>uncontained, this world city is<br />
a museum all surface, no<br />
symbol</p>
<p>3</p>
<p>no speech is<br />
ordinary</p>
<p>4</p>
<p>everything is<br />
different</p>
<p>5</p>
<p>trying to be<br />
strong as a rock<br />
<em>the odd stone out</em></p>
<p>6</p>
<p>then she<br />
would write</p>
<p><em>the things</em><br />
<em>that have fallen</em></p>
<p><em>it’s the rain</em></p>
<p>7</p>
<p>people come to the walls<br />
stop. the sound of water flowing</p>
<p>8</p>
<p><em>it’s with our walls we get past the wall</em></p>
<p>9</p>
<p>strangers in this museum,<br />
never stray from ordinary things</p>
<p>no speech is<br />
ordinary</p>
<p><em>we both look for clear lines</em></p>
<p>10</p>
<p>and there you are, missing<br />
the children in that<br />
house of clear<br />
lines</p>
<p>I passed<br />
this morning<br />
walking &#8212; still</p>
<p>no idea <em>how</em><br />
<em>to spend a fickle winter.</em></p>
<p>we can only die to be alive</p>
<p>reviewed by Steven Schroeder, Chicago</p>
<p>Leung Ping-Kwan. <em>Amblings</em>. Translated by Kit Kelen, Song Zijiang, Debby Sou Vai Keng, and Iris Fan Xing. Association of Stories in Macao, 2010. ISBN 978-99965-42-20-6.</p>
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		<title>remembering the body</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[every picture tells a story reading Alan Berecka’s Remembering the Body 1 no small thing, this pointing the way where story thinks itself at war with vision 2 where there is no vision the people perish intriguing, this telling stories &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/remembering-the-body/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>every picture tells a story</strong><br />
<em>reading Alan Berecka’s</em> Remembering the Body</p>
<p>1</p>
<p>no small thing, this<br />
pointing</p>
<p>the way<br />
where story<br />
thinks itself at war</p>
<p>with vision</p>
<p>2</p>
<p><em>where there is no vision</em><br />
<em>the people perish</em></p>
<p>intriguing, this<br />
telling</p>
<p>stories for the dead</p>
<p>3</p>
<p>not how you play<br />
the game, the game</p>
<p>itself. no point<br />
piling points up</p>
<p>in this dark place</p>
<p>4</p>
<p>playing <em>weiqi</em><br />
thinking pinball</p>
<p>missing prayer bells<br />
that may just be the point,</p>
<p>no verb contained</p>
<p>5</p>
<p>but not for lack of walls<br />
not for lack of icons</p>
<p>hanging on them</p>
<p>6</p>
<p>every icon<br />
<em>a crack, a crack</em><br />
<em>in everything. that’s how</em></p>
<p><em>the light gets in</em> &#8211;<br />
bathed in blood, the way<br />
the creator is</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://stevenschroeder.org/">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Alan Berecka. <em>Remembering the Body</em>. Mongrel Empire Press, 2011. ISBN 978-0-983-3052-0-0.</p>
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		<title>elegy for trains</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[seeing in circles reading Ben Myers&#8217; Elegy for Trains 1 what is not here is always here. there is no there there. it is hard to plant one green thing. out there is America, seeing in circles. the city is &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/elegy-for-trains/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>seeing in circles</strong><br />
<em>reading Ben Myers&#8217;</em> Elegy for Trains</p>
<p>1</p>
<p>what is not here is always<br />
here. there is no there<br />
there. it is hard</p>
<p>to plant one green thing.</p>
<p>out there is<br />
America,</p>
<p>seeing in circles.</p>
<p>the city is where I am. we<br />
is that by which I am.<br />
mountains always</p>
<p>wait for nothing.</p>
<p>2</p>
<p>somebody&#8217;s grandmother<br />
thought a white horse<br />
is not a horse.</p>
<p>the whiteness of the whale<br />
passes. the whale<br />
remains.</p>
<p>3</p>
<p>my daughter&#8217;s eyes<br />
roll at the sound<br />
of Iowa.</p>
<p>she knows<br />
suffering a day there<br />
will suffice for a life in poetry.</p>
<p>around here, we pronounce that Ohio.</p>
<p>4</p>
<p>a just word is<br />
worth a thousand pictures.</p>
<p>nothing always<br />
rights itself,<br />
like a book,</p>
<p>like a river<br />
that eats levees</p>
<p>the way you say modernity<br />
ate its scholars, like<br />
the memory<br />
of water.</p>
<p>5</p>
<p>tadpoles are a city<br />
at your feet.</p>
<p>trains pass.<br />
the poem is nothing.</p>
<p>6</p>
<p>water never leaves the sky.<br />
every real boy lies<br />
in some bloody city.</p>
<p>dry is forgetting how to love<br />
for so long every prophet turns<br />
and runs. every gourd vine withers</p>
<p>while god counts cattle,<br />
waiting for nothing.</p>
<p>7</p>
<p>a poem could be a failure<br />
of stem cells, a failure<br />
we will never</p>
<p>correct. never<br />
finished, it is<br />
abandoned.</p>
<p>8</p>
<p>we are<br />
now, beginnings</p>
<p>everywhere. crows see<br />
the light, get happy.</p>
<p>spirit breathes<br />
on the face<br />
of every body</p>
<p>of water. pray<br />
for rain.</p>
<p>sun, you know,<br />
doesn&#8217;t rise at all.</p>
<p>it stands still<br />
while the world<br />
turns, dripping<br />
waves of joy</p>
<p>we take for light.</p>
<p>9</p>
<p>take, read,<br />
this is my body.</p>
<p>10</p>
<p>light catches everything,<br />
contains nothing, a blessing.</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://stevenschroeder.org/">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Benjamin Myers. <em>Elegy for Trains</em>. Cheyenne, OK: Village Books Press. ISBN 978-0-9818680-6-6.</p>
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		<title>the origin of species and other poems</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[paradise is not a gift, it is an offering for Ernesto Cardenal, on reading The Origin of Species and Other Poems 1 he came, not from nowhere, saying revolution now revolution &#8211; now turn turn turn and, turning, walk the &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/the-origin-of-species-and-other-poems/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>paradise is not a gift, it is an offering</strong><br />
<em>for Ernesto Cardenal, on reading</em> The Origin of Species and Other Poems</p>
<p>1<br />
he came, not<br />
from nowhere, saying<br />
revolution now<br />
revolution &#8211;<br />
now</p>
<p>turn turn turn<br />
and, turning, walk<br />
the walk as though you<br />
mean it</p>
<p>2<br />
writing to a circle<br />
of his friends, Paul<br />
said of another</p>
<p><em>we’re fucked</em><br />
<em>if he did not rise</em></p>
<p>his editors cleaned this up<br />
so there would be no danger<br />
of someone taking offense</p>
<p>if we read it when<br />
there were children<br />
in church. suffer</p>
<p>the little children who<br />
know if there is no<br />
danger, there is no</p>
<p>possibility. Saul,<br />
Saul, can’t you see<br />
we’re fucked whether he</p>
<p>did or did not?<br />
every one of us is<br />
falling. but if one falling</p>
<p>rises, all<br />
rise. all rise.<br />
turn turn turn<br />
and, turning, walk<br />
the walk because you mean it.</p>
<p>3<br />
every single one of us is<br />
still rising from a single<br />
cell learning to walk<br />
on water &#8212; but all<br />
fall, and we crawl<br />
before (learning<br />
to walk) we rise</p>
<p>again again again<br />
and again.</p>
<p>4<br />
not one<br />
word.</p>
<p>if Anna’s cruel age<br />
taught us nothing<br />
else, it taught us</p>
<p>what is bad is being<br />
sure we know<br />
what we</p>
<p>have<br />
is final</p>
<p>i can’t say<br />
if cats name<br />
names, but i know<br />
they know a name when<br />
they hear it &#8212; and i can say<br />
most of what i know was<br />
named before i came<br />
to know it. still,</p>
<p>i know a named when<br />
a fitting name is spoken</p>
<p>5<br />
in this silver blue<br />
lake, serene,<br />
i think blue mountains<br />
the silver of the mirror lake</p>
<p>6<br />
Ernesto, a cosmos<br />
filled with white<br />
holes making Lebensraum</p>
<p>chills me. nothing<br />
matters more<br />
than emptiness</p>
<p>when it comes to light.</p>
<p>7<br />
i think the bison<br />
on the wall<br />
stood</p>
<p>for bison on the wall<br />
and children playing know<br />
that is good. that is very good.</p>
<p>8<br />
why not a bus<br />
with a sign that says<br />
Delphos and means what it says,</p>
<p>or an insect nothing<br />
but a salamander<br />
snack</p>
<p>that leaves<br />
nothing but a wall<br />
right where it belongs?</p>
<p>9<br />
a bus is as good a way as<br />
any to see years ago<br />
pink girl, in blue</p>
<p>in Alabama or Virginia<br />
on a ladder plucking apples<br />
the sister, blue too, painting white<br />
on the facade gazing at time passing</p>
<p>the white painting still fresh<br />
the brush dripping<br />
the hand on the apple</p>
<p>the gaze. on the bus<br />
or off, the state forgotten<br />
Malcolm knew, not<br />
the facade</p>
<p>10<br />
<em>entre el cristianismo y revolución no hay contradicción</em><br />
turn turn turn, and turning walk the walk<br />
because you mean it</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://stevenschroeder.org/">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Ernesto Cardenal. <em>The Origin of Species and Other Poems</em>. Translated by John Lyons. Lubbock, TX: Texas Tech University Press, 2011. ISBN 978-0-89672-689-5.</p>
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		<title>bluster</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[keep the show on the air reading Melissa Morphew&#8217;s Bluster 1 Decay so everyday natural it&#8217;s not necessary to stop and catch your breath, just hold on to the only matchstick pole not broken in this hurricane while the camera &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/bluster/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>keep the show on the air</strong><br />
<em>reading Melissa Morphew&#8217;s Bluster</em></p>
<p>1</p>
<p>Decay so everyday natural it&#8217;s not necessary<br />
to stop and catch your breath, just hold on<br />
to the only matchstick pole not broken<br />
in this hurricane while the camera<br />
rolls. Stand pat, keep talking,<br />
<em>keep the show on the air.</em></p>
<p>Matter of fact autopsy of the sacrament<br />
of marriage in a voice so Tennessee<br />
soft it covers every sharp corner<br />
the way kudzu does till<br />
all the world is green</p>
<p>and you&#8217;d swear there&#8217;s nothing there<br />
that could cut you, all smiles <em>bland and</em><br />
<em>expected as the courtesy of name tags.</em></p>
<p>2</p>
<p>You see the haint at the front door when<br />
you open it, standing there plain as day</p>
<p>an orphan, and you take her in<br />
because you can&#8217;t even leave</p>
<p>the cold that will drown you<br />
homeless. And you know</p>
<p>you have to keep the door<br />
ajar for the spirit</p>
<p>that will make you sway<br />
like dancing, but it is no sin,</p>
<p>the way the gray contempt for sky<br />
you call a storm edged perfect day<br />
looks like hope, but it is no virtue.</p>
<p>3</p>
<p>take a hard look at what you thought<br />
love and you won&#8217;t doubt<br />
the world is flat</p>
<p>no matter what they say about that oblate<br />
spheroid shit. The edges are there all right<br />
shrouded in time like some parasite<br />
vine so dense no light escapes,<br />
and it will cut you.</p>
<p>Call all this miscellaneous<br />
for a laugh in a voice <em>sweet as</em><br />
<em>candied violets</em> full of purring hope,<br />
but you know there&#8217;s a touch of winter<br />
behind it, and it&#8217;s bound and determined<br />
to come, come hell or high water.</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://stevenschroeder.org/">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Melissa Morphew. <em>Bluster</em>. Sacramento Poetry Center Press, 2011. ISBN 978-0-9831362-1-7.</p>
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		<description><![CDATA[One of the best things about Al DeGenova&#8217;s Postcards to Jack is that it is aware that a book is a performance (and certainly part of the credit for this goes to Matt Barton and Naked Mannekin Press). The chapbook &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2011/12/17/postcards-to-jack/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>One of the best things about Al DeGenova&#8217;s Postcards to Jack is that it is aware that a book is a performance (and certainly part of the credit for this goes to Matt Barton and Naked Mannekin Press). The chapbook is right for this collection, and postcards from the road are an appropriate twenty-first century shattering of the road trip narrative with which Jack Kerouac is inevitably associated. Scattering haikus set in a handwriting font among (mostly) prose poems is consistent with the haibun tradition, and it imparts a studied appearance of spontaneity that is a nod to Kerouac&#8217;s poetics and a tribute to DeGenova&#8217;s disciplined practice of improvisation. Ending the collection with home makes it a nostos journey (not far from Jack&#8217;s travels, which never strayed as far from Lowell as one might think in search of &#8220;it&#8221;). The road is not so much a matter of getting from one place to another as of getting to here now and seeing it new.</p>
<p>This little book begins before it begins, with a poem printed to appear as something scrawled on plain brown paper, on de-iced Indiana asphalt: &#8220;nothing moves / save me / at 80 mph&#8230;&#8221; On the Interstate in Indiana praying for salvation at 80 mph &#8220;driving into sunrise / with ten thousand days in tow&#8221; &#8212; a stunning image of the specific elsewhere in which this poet reads Jack &#8220;Loud but not so clear anymore.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;I&#8217;m drowning in this new century, Jack,&#8221; DeGenova writes. &#8220;Gotta go, gotta go, gotta go, we&#8217;re all gonna fuckin&#8217; explode!&#8221; Not the atom bomb or the creeping suburbanization of 1950s Cold War America, but &#8220;plastic and Wi-Fi nights of virtual conversation &#8212; programmed thinking, programmed wars, programmed music, programmed religion&#8230; Miles is in the sky&#8230; cell phone rings, and no one is there&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p>Program or be programmed, as they say&#8230;</p>
<p>Yes, Kerouac has a way with sad, and so does DeGenova, &#8220;a small word for a poet,&#8221; but every poet knows small is beautiful in particular &#8212; and that there is no place that is not.</p>
<p>Writing to Jack from all over the place, DeGenova makes his way home, to &#8220;the sad eternal core,&#8221; which is, no doubt, &#8220;old as coal&#8221; &#8212; not older than love, but its &#8220;sad distillate,&#8221; made flesh, I&#8217;d say, in los abuelos de san juan, the viejos gathering in a plaza by the bay, the dance that &#8220;holds the song in its pace.&#8221;</p>
<p>DeGenova places the image of being &#8220;homesick all my life&#8221; in Napoli, but it is with him (as it was with Jack) everywhere he writes. Having spent much of my life on Route 66, that particular gotta go gotta go gotta go struck a chord &#8212; blowing yourself into words, becoming &#8220;the asphalt of sad Rt. 66,&#8221; sets me to thinking how hot asphalt on that old road broken by the rhythm of stop signs and local intersections differs from the de-iced asphalt of the Interstate.</p>
<p>There is so much fuel here for contemplating what it is while on all that road going, going, I think, even when we&#8217;re there for the pasticcio. There is a touch of sadness in the image of home at the end, love older than coal that is the product of life decayed (on its way to being diamond):</p>
<p>&#8230;Sometimes it&#8217;s just time<br />
to go home. Go Jack, to your cats<br />
where Mamere irons your shirts and makes</p>
<p>your highballs. I think it&#8217;s time &#8211;<br />
my grass at home needs cutting, the deck<br />
needs cleaning. I have to go now</p>
<p>put this box of sad souvenirs away in my closet<br />
behind the beat old gym shoes and<br />
silk ties fallen from their plastic hangers.</p>
<p>I miss her warm thigh against my hip.<br />
There is pasticcio baking in the oven.<br />
Roses are blooming over my arbor.</p>
<p>In the end, as much Candide as Kerouac. I catch my breath with the thunderstorm singing &#8220;her wicked, sexy song.&#8221; And I want to say to the poet who has made this beautiful sad book, this performance, yes, yes, sometimes it&#8217;s just time &#8212; and we can all be sure if this is where we want to die we will. We will. There is no other place for it.</p>
<p>Now, play it again.</p>
<p>reviewed by <a href="http://stevenschroeder.org/">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Albert DeGenova. <em>Postcards to Jack</em>. Chicago: Naked Mannekin Press, 2010. ISBN 978-1-61584-279-7.</p>
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		<title>a goldfinch instant</title>
		<link>http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2010/12/02/a-goldfinch-instant/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Dec 2010 03:34:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Donna Pucciani]]></category>
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		<category><![CDATA[Paul Friedrich]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[I usually read poetry books in pieces, at whim, leafing through the pages to scan whatever suits my mood of the moment. However, having glanced at the first few pages of “A Goldfinch Instant” by Paul Friedrich, I turned page &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2010/12/02/a-goldfinch-instant/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I usually read poetry books in pieces, at whim, leafing through the pages to scan whatever suits my mood of the moment. However, having glanced at the first few pages of “A Goldfinch Instant” by Paul Friedrich, I turned page after page until the very end. It grabbed me and didn’t let go. An artful juxtaposition of prose and haiku keeps tipping the reader back and forth in a kind of emotional mambo. Sweetness and violence pervade the imagery in equal measure. Reminiscences of children and parents, nature and the seasons, little pieces of life and death, all converge to create an emotional geography that matches the varieties of physical geography in the book: Mexico, India, Russia, Paris, and the American locales of Chicago, the Rockies, and the Golden Gate Bridge, among others. The writing is so intense that a sense of near-panic emerges, as if life were too short to contain all of this. And indeed, the most intense experiences appear in the briefer poems, just when the poet seems to promise something of a pause in the action. I even enjoyed reading the endnotes, which explain the poetic references to Mexican, Turkish, and Chinese images, and allusions to T.S. Eliot, Goya, and Durer; these attest to the fact that Friedrich is not only a fine poet but also a great scholar</p>
<p><a href="http://vacpoetry.org/pucciani.htm">Donna Pucciani</a>, Wheaton, Illinois</p>
<p>Paul Friedrich, <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/agoldfinchinstant.htm"><em>a goldfinch instant: Concord to India Haikus</em></a>. virtual artists collective, 2010. ISBN 978-0-98198-989-1</p>
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		<title>child support</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Nov 2010 21:23:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Alan Berecka]]></category>
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		<description><![CDATA[Robb Jackson’s latest book is a collection of occasional poems.  Each poem was written for his four children on their birthdays.  As the title of the collection suggests, these poems begin after the end of the marriage from which the &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2010/11/04/child-support/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Robb Jackson’s latest book is a collection of occasional poems.  Each poem was written for his four children on their birthdays.  As the title of the collection suggests, these poems begin after the end of the marriage from which the children were born.  They are poems written in exile, full of disappointment and longing.  As the years and poems pile up, the poems and the relationships with the children mature.  Each child eventually comes to live with their father to attend the university at which he teaches. The collection is impressive in the way it reaches an emotional critical mass, a heft gained through persistent effort; but this is not to say that each poem is not worthy of individual attention.  Jackson is a poet who toes the line of sentimentality, but he doesn’t cross it.</p>
<p>In my favorite poem of the collection, “Eight Journal Sketches &#8212; Taking Leah Home,” Jackson displays his considerable skill as a poet. Here he brings his nearly adult daughter to his own childhood home to visit his aged parents. In this poem the passing of time, the interplay of the generations, are handled deftly. In part five of the poem, the image of his ancient father smiling at the tombstone of his grandfather for a picture taken by Jackson’s daughter foretells the poem’s powerful ending.  In the poem’s final part, “Leaving Again,” Jackson paints an eloquent scene.  &#8220;Our eyes meeting in a last look / spark unspoken a recognition / that this may well be the last time / we will all see each other alive. / We look away, moving swiftly to fumble with luggage / &amp; locks &amp; doors to check the tears. / It’s still dark &amp; raining hard as we pull away.&#8221; For its look into the psychology of the estranged but caring father, for the artful craft of a fine poet, <em>Child Support</em> is well worth the read.</p>
<p><a href="http://vacpoetry.org/berecka.htm">Alan Berecka</a>, Corpus Christi, Texas</p>
<p>Robb Jackson, <em>Child Support</em>. Corpus Christi, 2010. ISBN 978-1-45373-209-0.</p>
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		<title>horse and rider</title>
		<link>http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2010/10/15/horse-and-rider/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 15 Oct 2010 16:16:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<category><![CDATA[Melissa Range]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Steven Schroeder]]></category>
		<category><![CDATA[Texas Tech University Press]]></category>

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		<description><![CDATA[Every poem is a performance, every performance an experiment. (Note to those who put a wall in poetry between page and stage: the world&#8217;s a stage, the page included.) The play on these pages explodes sometimes with music, bursts always &#8230; <a href="http://vacpoetry.org/readingroom/2010/10/15/horse-and-rider/">Continue reading <span class="meta-nav">&#8594;</span></a>]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Every poem is a performance, every performance an experiment. (Note to those who put a wall in poetry between page and stage: the world&#8217;s a stage, the page included.) The play on these pages explodes sometimes with music, bursts always with Tennessee &#8212; and with a Bible pondered in hearts there for a long time. There is a sense, especially in the beginning, that this whole book could go up in song: it dances from eye to tongue and demands to move, like walking into a Holiness church and getting happy.</p>
<p>The title poem (13-14) is a taste of what is possible here: &#8220;make of your voice a shaft of flame / shifting into cloud and back again // a rift in a wave, a crack in a wheel, / a road in the midst of the sea; / make of your voice a staff turned snake / turned brass turned tambourine.&#8221;</p>
<p>And with &#8220;High Lonesome&#8221; (16-17), the reader is transported to &#8220;Tennessee November: nothing slumbers: / in the barn, bluebottles&#8217; ice-whittled shells / hue the tops of feed and water buckets, // inlay corn shucks and tobacco flakes / instead of the lashes of Appaloosa or Paint, / Everything which could be salvaged // has gone to rot&#8230;&#8221;</p>
<p>The series of poems that sing weapons in part two (29-46) begins with two virtuoso performances of sonnets (&#8220;The Arrow&#8221; and &#8220;The Bow&#8221;) and contains some of the most chilling imagery, as in &#8220;The Trebuchet&#8221; (34-35): &#8220;I teach land-bound things to fly, / turn mountains into missiles. / I loft more than hunks of rock. / With thought and craft, all may be / transformed to weaponry&#8230;&#8221; The last two lines of the poem &#8212; &#8220;like you, I&#8217;m an ingenious engine, / the union of force and intellect.&#8221; &#8212; rivet attention not only on weaponry but also on what it means to be human, also brought to mind with jarring clarity in &#8220;The Rope&#8221; (45-46), which ends with &#8220;Twine wasn&#8217;t made for this. I should be baling hay. // I&#8217;d rather pull a bucket from a well, / haul a rowboat to a dock, give an acrobat a path // across the air. That&#8217;s a kinder life for a piece of string. / I&#8217;d like to rig a mast up, and hear the sailors sing. // Take me from this limb, or if you keep me here, / tie me to an old tire, and let the children swing.&#8221;</p>
<p>There are moments in the last section when pure delight in sound threatens to overwhelm &#8212; but that is in keeping with the pentecostal imagery. Carried away, it will taste just right to some, even if it is too much for others. No one will call it bland, and most, I think, will find themselves singing along.</p>
<p><a href="http://stevenschroeder.org">Steven Schroeder</a>, Chicago</p>
<p>Melissa Range. <em>Horse and Rider</em>. Lubbock, TX: <a href="http://ttupress.org/CatalogueRetrieve.aspx?ProductID=2065826&amp;A=SearchResult&amp;SearchID=1353771&amp;ObjectID=2065826&amp;ObjectType=27">Texas Tech University Press</a>, 2010. ISBN 978-0-89672-702-1.</p>
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